The only changes I would make would be in the center body of the document which spefically names the twenty-seven specific reasons for such a declaration. The most glaring needed contemporization would be replacing the phrases of "the present King Of Great Britain" and "the British Crown" with 'King Barry Soetoro", "the presently pretending to be President Muslim Monarch Master", "Baracka the Benevolent Bolshevik", or some such.
It is historically horrific how similar these two men of history are in their "histor(ies) of repeated injuries and usurpations, all having in direct object the establishment of an absolute Tyranny over (America)."
Among Jefferson's charges against George III are indictments of Baracka the First. Over half of Jefferson's charges against King George can be contemporized and applied to King Barry. "To prove this, let Facts be submitted to a candid world"---
"He has refused his Assent to Laws, the most wholesome and necessary for the public good", like having his Justice Departmnet sue the State of Arizona over its immigration law and the State of Florida for cleaning up its voters rolls.
"He has endeavored to...obstruct the Laws for Naturalization of Foreigners." He openly defies the law and refuses his duty of deporting illegal aliens apprehended by local law enforcement.
"He has obstructed the Administration of Justice" by allowing and encouraging his fellow traveller Attorney General to refuse to indict, or even investigate the New Black Panther Party for voter intimidation and incitement to kidnap and murder. He has further obstructed justice by claiming executive privilege to protect himself and his aforementioned A.G. from murder and other charges in the Fast and Furious scandalous scheme of giving guns to fellow, even more openly criminal criminals.
"He has made Judges dependent on his Will alone". Think of his two bimbo appointees to the Supreme Court and Chief Justice John Roberts.
"He has erected a multitude of New Officers and sent hither swarms of Officers to harrass (the) people and eat out their substance-" Think of his thirty unelected, unconfirmed, unaccountable czars and the EPA. And be ready for 16,000 new IRS agents, if we don't dethrone him and his Demoncatic devotees in Congress by electing a President, more Tea Party Representatives and and some real Republican, not Repulsican Senators to repeal that monstrosity Obamacare. And those 16,000 won't be Internal Revenue Service as much as they will be Intranational Raiding Squads.
"He has
"He has combined with others to subject us to a jurisdiction foreign to our constitution" Think of his continous kowtowing to the UN, his on-going, international apologies and his willingness to allow our military personnel to be tried by laws contrary to our own UCMJ.
"For
"For imposing taxes on us without our consent."
"For depriving us in many cases, of the benefits of Trial by Jury" while insisting that foreign combatants waging war against the United States should enjoy those benefits.
"He has excited domestic insurrections amongst us-" Think of his unwarranted, race based interdiction into the case of would be murderer, thug Trayvon Martin.
"He has suspended the Legislature" by making recess appointments when the Legislature was not recessed and by decreeing laws through unconstitutional executive orders. Think of his executive edict proclaiming The Dream Act as law, even after Congress soundly defeated the matter.
"He has plundered our" treasury with double flight vacations and multi-trillion dollar boondoggles to benefit his benefactors, like bankrupt Solyndra and Fiskar Automotive, which is having to recall every car they've manufactured in Europe with American money.
"For taking away our Charters and abolishing our most valuable Laws and altering fundamentally the Forms of our Governments." He did campaign to fundamentally transform America.
In just a few minutes, from more than half of Jefferson's twenty-seven assertions, I have been able to make parallel comparisons between two tyrants tyrannizing the American people over two centuries apart. This Independence Day, we need to pledge and promise to make November 6, 2012, our new Independence Day by declaring with our votes that "We the (Voters) of the United States of America, appealing to the Supreme Judge of the world for the rectitude of our intentions, do, in the Name of and by the Authority of (ourselves), the good People of the (United States), publish and declare that the (people of America) are, and of Right ought to be Free and Independent (Individuals); that they are Absolved from Allegiance to (Baracka Hussein Obama).